I can hear trouble brewing
I can hear it in the leaves
I can hear it in the murmur
Of the apocalyptic bees
I can hear trouble brewing
I can hear it in the traffic
I can hear trouble brewing
I try not to panic
I can hear it in the boondocks
I can hear it in the city
Whatever it is it’s coming
It’s not going to be pretty
Now I hear it knocking
Insistently at the door
I pull down the shades
I’m not home anymore
But the postman’s shrill whistle
Warns me it is done
Whatever it is has found me
In the mailbox under the sun
Clever poem! I was sad when it ended, wondering what horrors could possibly be lurking in that mailbox. It’s sort of ironic that you referred to the bees as apocalyptic, because August-September is the time for wasps and hornets right now (they get in your face this time of year). I have nothing appropriate to say about those bringers of pain and stings, though. Let’s just say I’m lucky not to be allergic to them! 😛
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I intentionally kept it vague because I didn’t want it to be too revealing. If it were a short story I probably would have to be more forthcoming 🙂
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That is amazing. I confess, I have a tendency to jump right to the point and oftentimes forget that less is more. Good reminder, too, because vagueness can be more powerful than just stating the reality.
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I have has a number of poems published using this technique; it is very effective if not overused; sometimes the anticipation of an unknown horror is more frightening than its revelation
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True! Very true. Sometimes, the unknown is feared more than facts. It has a power of its own, making it a useful tool for writers.
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I really like this. I often feel I am in some kind of danger, unable to pinpoint it and find myself looking out my windows, fearful. This captures that violation of our happiness perfectly
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well said , Billy; it is a sense of violation. Hey! I want to follow your blog but I can’t see a ‘follow’ button
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I relate to this. Not just a mailman showing up, but anyone at my door.
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thank you. it is pleasing to post a poem that others can relate to
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