5 thoughts on “Not Everything Survived

  1. I preferred version you first published, which appeared in my email. This edited version is okay, but the other ending made me smile.


  2. thanks for that. sometimes I meddle with my poems too much. I’ll see if I can recover the original version,
    the one with the sun gloating. Yeh, I liked it too. I should have the courage of my convictions 🙂


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