Maybe I was too precious.
Maybe I should have had a thicker skin.
That way I wouldn’t have let the hurt in.
But then I wouldn’t have had that poem.
The equation holds.
Sometimes the best poems come from the deepest hurts.
But maybe I could have tried forgiveness too.
Chelsea spotted it in her comment.
‘Ha! Often that rail has a broken line’.
Maybe I had offended him. I’m not dim
But I am slow.
I should be building bridges. Not walls.
But then I would have had a different poem.
A more upbeat one.
I will try/
Brilliant 🖤
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thanks; straight from the heart; written at 2.30 in the morning 🙂
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My comment happened closer to 4…
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looks like we both work better in the wee small hours 🙂
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You write from the heart. That’s the way to do it.
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thanks Neil: it sure is; pity you got to go through the pain first though 🙂
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Beautiful
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thank you; It’s a heartfelt poem; you can’t always write poems like that: you have to go through the experience first
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btw i went to leave a comment on your blog — it is a policy of mine: if someone goes to the trouble to read my post and comment on it I will reciprocate BUT thefre was no place to leave a comment 😦
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