Okay. Well, that didn’t work


I have a very bad feeling.

Tell me I’m wrong.

That I have written myself into obscurity.

That I was too clever by half.

That no one knew what the f*** I was writing about

in the previous post ‘Not a nightingale ode’.

It was a glass of red wine.

But that’s what happens when you put up a post

while you’ve been drinking

while you’ve been rhapsodizing about a glass

of red wine

17 thoughts on “Okay. Well, that didn’t work

  1. No, it worked. I knew what you were writing about; although, I thought it was brandy…. πŸ˜‰

    The bit about twisting the thin waist is what caused me to pause and consider, then the rest came clear. It is brilliant, John!!

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    • Seriously, John. I would encourage you NOT to rewrite it. The mystery is part of its magical appeal! By the time I finished reading it, I knew what the subject was. It does not need to be more obvious.

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