I have a very bad feeling.
Tell me I’m wrong.
That I have written myself into obscurity.
That I was too clever by half.
That no one knew what the f*** I was writing about
in the previous post ‘Not a nightingale ode’.
It was a glass of red wine.
But that’s what happens when you put up a post
while you’ve been drinking
while you’ve been rhapsodizing about a glass
of red wine
I’m not sure I should have, but this had me laughing out loud 🤣🤣🤣
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that’s fine: the joke’s on me 🙂 at least the post about the post that didn’t work did 🙂
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🤣🤣🤣
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hahaha – deep red thoughts….
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you ever written a post, Beth, where the subject matter got away from you? well, that’s what happened with me; I’ll treat it as a learning experience 🙂
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A drinks is just the thing. What else can I say. 😃
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well it worked for me:) I got one good poem out of the wine glass, maybe two 🙂
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No, it worked. I knew what you were writing about; although, I thought it was brandy…. 😉
The bit about twisting the thin waist is what caused me to pause and consider, then the rest came clear. It is brilliant, John!!
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thank you; I really worked at it and yes, it could have been brandy:)
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😒😜
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it’s funny; it looked like the Ode poem actually did work: it got more ‘likes’ than most of my other posts; strange 🙂
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Haha!! I can relate on so may levels!! 😉🖤
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writing and drinking normally go together 🙂
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Seriously, it was an ode to a wine glass? I was divided between Chicken and Turkey
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it really was — but somewhere the line of imagery went astray 🙂 I shall have to attempt a rewrite — when I’m feeling a little more focused 🙂
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Seriously, John. I would encourage you NOT to rewrite it. The mystery is part of its magical appeal! By the time I finished reading it, I knew what the subject was. It does not need to be more obvious.
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thank you; I’m convinced: it shall stand as it is !
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