You have the attention span,
he said,
of a gnat.
I thought [briefly]
about that:
the skim
the look;
the review
not the book;
the single
not the CD;
a movement not
the whole symphony;
the single poem—
a story won’t do—
especially if short
think haiku.
Life’s short.
Try this, that.
Stay light,
says the gnat.
This is awesome 👏👏👏
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thanks; it was a pretty mean thing to say about a ‘friend’ but at least I got a good poem out of it:)
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so cute. and smart. I would take it as a compliment
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thanks Beth; you help me view the world with a fresh set of eyes 🙂
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Quoth the Gnat
Evermore
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tje raven and the gnat must have similar viewpoints 🙂
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a gnat,
fancy that,
better than being compared to a rat …
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a cat would have been good but a gnat is not bad 🙂
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