
That’s the stuff you’re keeping out of your poems,
Ted Hughes said to his dismantling wife,
smashing the mahogany tabletop, the high stool,
during one of their periods of interminable strife
and I thought of the things each of us omits
when we sit down and write our little poems,
our peccadilloes, annoying habits, the times
we’ve ghosted or been ghosted on our phones,
whether at times we’ve kicked the dog or cat
or when someone’s needed us we didn’t give a rats.
Little things we’d rather not disclose
like walking around in our poems without clothes
I love this! Great images, the rhyme scheme works, and I love those last lines.
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thank you very much; it’s one of those rare instances where the poem virtually writes itself 🙂
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Truly delightful! And I love the dismantling wife. Somehow it suits poor Sylvia. And walking around in your poem without any clothes. Great line!
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thank you; I had such fun writing this 🙂
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oh, so good! the musical, magical sound of truth
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thank you so much, Beth; just got home from a night out with my mates AND i read this 🙂
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Great poem. I loved it.
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A poem without clothes. That must be revealing your inner thoughts! Great poem.
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🙂 yes, I don’t know where that last line came from but once it was there, it felt right so I let it stay 🙂
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The last line is so clever! This is a very enjoyable poem
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I agree; it has a sense of lightness and humour ; it ‘popped’ in my head as I approached the last few lines; I got lucky 🙂
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On the contrary, i feel most of us bare it all in poetry, thinking that everybody would think it is just a poem!
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thanks for expressing a contrary viewpoint; I think you’re right !
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A naked poet. What would he say? Hello John and Merry Christmas. I enjoyed your work. After I read one of your poems. I want to know more.
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thank you, John. Happy Xmas back. I am a grandad like you so I took an extra interest in your poems. I like your work, all of it: you have lived a full life and it shows in your work: robust, romantic,
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Thank you John and good to be grandad. Merry Christmas.
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I’d take my clothes off in all my poems, but I think people would stop reading them and just stare. Then, all the effort of crafting the perfect lines of verse would be wasted on lustful gazes. Fear, it may be the same as you. Alas, guess we shall have to keep our clothes on mid-pen.
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LOL ; it might be advisable 🙂
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Anyways, there’s always the rush of after the poem is done.
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that is certainly true 🙂
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