
Look, I’m going to be honest. I made a mess of this.
You shouldn’t try to explain the inexplicable.
I wrote a poem. Big deal.
People write poems all the time. They don’t try to explain them. They just present them. And that’s what I should have done.
But instead I went all mystical: probably the result of my religious upbringing and the time in the Pentecostal Church when I was speaking in tongues. Well, that’s what I thought I did. I probably spoke gibberish. Come to think of it, that’s what others around me sounded like.
The trouble is I don’t stay grounded long enough. I never have. You heard that story about the boy with his head in the clouds, well, that was me.
So I wrote this poem or someone did —- do we still subscribe to ‘the Muse’ theory? It was sort of compelling and confusing at the same time. Are you familiar with that feeling?
And okay, I put down stuff about jabbering seagulls overhead, and the guy with a metal detector who found something and went a bit gaga with it, like I did with the poem I found in my head, the one I carried around like a precious fluid till I got back to the car and wrote it in my notebook, without a drop being spilled.
That’s what I was trying to do all along. Get that last line in. Well, I did it. Sorry I messed up along the way
*pic courtesy of Pinterest by Veronika Gilkova
Hahaha!!! I know that feeling. Donβt you hate it when you donβt make it to that notepad
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it’s bloody frustrating; why couldn’t the ‘muse’ have waited till I was close to the car π
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oh yes… so frustrating! I do love the last line too.
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ah well; I got a post out of my frustration; sometimes it’s good to vent π
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Venting is better than fermenting. π
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is that original? that is brilliant !!
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I think it is original. I was quite pleased with it. βΊοΈ
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so you should be; so true:)
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A very apt title, John.
Just as Notebook is now
an app on my phoneπ±
Without it
I never leave home π
in case my muse conspires
to inspire a poem π
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Very nice rhyming for a comment David….you surprise me….phone/home/poem…bit ETish…nice.
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You are extra terrestrially perceptive
… for a terrestrial life form, Don π½
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Why thankyou David…….
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thanks David, must see about that app; that word ‘conspires’ is deliciously accurate π
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I’m always amazed at the way someone somewhere will always forage round in our imperfect written offerings and extract something beautiful from them.π
Dauphy always wakes me up during the night with his bright ideas. Not helpful for a good nights sleep. Happy writing John.π
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π so true , Hobbo; that Dauphy: he might need a gentle course of sleeping tablets: his Muse must be stilled somehow π
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I’ll maybe lace his gravy bones with a drop of my single malt. That should do thee trick.
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HaHa π that is so good π
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I quite like gibberish…..and I like having my head in the clouds….you see things that ground-dwelling mortals can’t see…..
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I’m about to hit the sack, Don; that is a gorgeous comment: much thanks: will look at your material tomorrow when I’m fresh π
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I end up writing most of mine on the back of cigarette packets! π
And either way around my friend – wherever and whatever you write will always be alright with us π€π€
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I like that; we’re all allowed to mess up now and then in our writing, aren’t we? π
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So true, so realistic, one can so easily emphasise.
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I’m glad this one found some empathy with readers; it was a little wanton π
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I love this poem, John. The beautiful mess, which forms without a spill. Stunning how your free-flow feels like magic.
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that’s a wonderful comment; thank you; I really thought I had messed up writing a piece about messing up, but it did flow out of me π
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