
The sun levers me from bed .
Slides over the smooth rump
of hills .
Steams away the frost .
The cats desert the hearth .
There are a few embers left ,
chunks of ash
warm and marshmellow fluffy .
Not a ripple of sound .
Everyoneβs asleep .
I put two logs on the ash ,
a tangle of twigs
and settle back on the cane lounge
waiting for the wood to catch .
Two dragonflies clamber over
the green scrim of curtain ;
a young magpie rests high up
in the fork of a scrawly gum ;
from the next farm the caw
of a crow ,
the baaa of distant lambs ,
overhead the sudden scraaak
of galahs ;
my stomach rumbles —
breakfast !
the grey slumbering Sloth
and Mao , the red burmese cross ,
in expectation of warmth
slink around the hearth ;
a flame stirs the stubborn fuel
crackles
sets this poem ablaze
I loved the marshmallow fluffy ashes, but I wouldn’t have had the temerity to call Mrs Hobbo a grey lumbering sloth!π
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HaHa ; that is good, so clever π
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π I’m being serious!
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okay π good to hear your smiley voice, Hobbo π
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Those galahs…then the kookaburras ah the magic of the early morning.
Love this piece. You have really captured the morning. Makes me want to leave the city and go back to the farm.
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thank you: it’s more of a calm, reflective piece than I usually write but after the turmoil of the previous two posts I needed something settling π
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This poem started out blazing and stayed afire all the way through. Well done.
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thank you; I had to write something conventional after the misfire of the previous post; it’s like when you fall of your horse, you’ve got to bet back on and stay on π or something like that π
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The first line scoops me right into the earthy hearth-y feel of this poem. Enjoyed all the morning creatures and the way the poem burns. Wonderful.
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thank you; I needed to write something cAlm, slow-burning; glad you like it π
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Very good….I like the first line…..’The sun levers me from bed’….
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thanks, Don: how you start a poem is critical: it gets the momentum going and sets the tone π
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Agreed…and the last line….oh?, I didn’t expect this?
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π the last line is perhaps the trickiest of all; there is so much written on this topic and , of course, in light verse in which you and Hobbo excel, it’s like the punch line of a joke. In more serious poems,perhaps, it should leave the reader with the feeling of wow! what a killer line! whether it ties the poem up neatly or not —
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This is a beautiful and descriptive slow burn, John. You’re so gifted with words!
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well, on this one I was. that hard hat poem was too kinetic; I needed to write something calming π
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Calming is contagious. It’s something I like to catch; mask-free!
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Lovely. Relaxing, descriptive, atmospheric, calming, warm and comfortable. Very lovely.
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thanks; it was a very soothing, therapeutic poem to write π
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What a beautiful picture! Future painting?
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yes, it would make a good painting but it won’t come from me: I can’t even draw π¦
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Ah, if I only could have been there too!
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π it was a very restful time π
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