
When people ask me, did you have any inkling in all that time you knew him, I say, not really, then I think of the incident in the restaurant,the one that slipped beneath my notice in what was meant to be a piece of devilish fluff in ‘No Sympathy ….’
It began in the third line: Hey! Is that a glass of water you threw over me? That’s when autobiography took over and followed us out onto the sidewalk where I was shoved to the ground when my back was turned and my mate who had turned rogue did a runner.
So did I know? Did I suspect? I sure did: in those moments he unleashed diminutive, haiku-sized bursts of anger, I could feel the embers of a conflagration 18 years before that the forensic squad, armed with new evidence and methods of detection, were sifting through and building a case.
His mate, Dale , who let him stay on his property at Second Valley in a caravan while he got his life together, fell victim to Adrian’s wrath.
All that time Adrian proclaimed his innocence, He was the only suspect. He lived at my place for a while, He rode a bike, did the gardening, spoke to the kids, Everyone loved him. A top bloke, they said. Then the night ….
Once my friend was charged with the cold case and sentenced, he finally admitted to us: Just think, he said, 15 years for five seconds of madness.
That little haiku of a revelation warned me that of all the affairs we have to manage in life, our temper comes first.
😳 there is a lesson to be learned.
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that is for sure; we go to see him, now and then —
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I’m sure he appreciates the visits.
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yes, he does: let bygones be bygones: it was a hell of a burden to carry around for 18 years, though I think towards the end he really thought he had got away with it 🙂
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very powerful life lesson
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it sure is, Beth: whenever I feel that raging beast rise up within me, I remember my mate, Adrian —
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A very timely piece of repentance, I can smell a bit of burned politicians flesh here?
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🙂 a lot of burnt politician’s flesh 🙂
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A bit of a deviation from your usual. I like it.
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thanks Chel: like you I like to push the envelope; one final part in this series coming up 🙂
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A powerful true story with lessons to learn, and very well told John.
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thanks Hobbo: it made a deep and lasting impression on me —
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I’m sure it did.
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I like how the temper is an affair. A questionable choice one passion that might just be too irresistible to not indulge, but the “haiku results” longer in sentence than syllables. Elegant prose, John. I like seeing your voice stretch in that way.
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thanks Karen; I like how you put that; I find i can make my voice stretch more in prose than poems these days —
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You should keep stretching, and see where it takes you. Did you see Fandango’s photo prompt, I’m creating something, it’s a neat view from above.
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no; what’s the link?
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https://fivedotoh.com/category/flash-fiction-challenge/
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thanks; but I have enough material on my plate now; otherwise ….
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I feel you. Week 2 is subplottong for my novel, and I’m working to finish a short story by Friday. Still, gotta warm up somehow. Might write that to get the fingers flowing this am.
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looks like you’ve got plenty on your plate too; may it go well 🙂
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From temper by haiku to jail by sentence. A very sobering tale. I knew a guy who went to jail. Oh yeah. I wrote a poem about him. It’s in this blog somewhere. But I never visited him. I think I was way too shocked. The incident really undermined my faith in instinct for trustworthiness.
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horrible acts — and they occur every day as the media constantly reminds us — undermine our faith in humanity and sadly the criminal justice system — there is much more still to be written
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Very well written and a strong lesson. One of mankind’s double-edged sword. You only see what you are able to cope with.
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So beautifully put.
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great comment esp that last sentence; thanks Ulle — much to ponder there 🙂
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Whoa! A short and powerful piece. Wild to think that someone we know could be a violent criminal.
“haiku-sized bursts of anger” – this is such a good line!
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thanks; well, I finally got that out of my system 🙂
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