
The crow
in the crossbars of
the power pole
is saying, Hey John.
You don’t have to worry, man.
You are not one of those who bring so much courage
to the world that it has to kill you
So don’t ruffle your feathers.
Pardon? I say.
I can read you like a book, he says, speaking of which
‘But it will break you.
It breaks everyone.
But you are one of those strong in the broken places’,
as Hemingway would say.
You read Hemingway?
Of course, who do you think I’m quoting?
You are a most learned crow, I say.
But it will kill you, he says,
‘It kills everyone
the very brave and very gentle
but if you are neither of these it will still kill you
but there will be no special hurry’.
That is sort of comforting, I say. Thank you.
‘Farewell to Arms’, he adds. Due attribution.
You should read it sometime.
I think I have, but not with the diligence you accorded it.
And with a flick of his suave black wings, he flies away.
Fascinating, John. Really thought provoking and wonder-rich. I can’t pretend that I fully understand its meaning but I feel wiser for trying. 🙂
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Lol ; not sure if I fully understand it either but the phrasing fascinated me, and I did see a crow staring down at me while I was thinking about it so it came together; I tried to inject a little humor 🙂
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Oh yes. There’s definitely a little light heartedness in there amongst the Hemingway.
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thanks; I feel it was needed 🙂
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That’s a wonderful imagination John 👍🤝
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thanks ; sometimes it runs away with me 🙂
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crows are very wise, and i once saw a ‘murder’ of them standing around in a park watching me as i walked by and thought they might be conspiring to commit some act against me. ). love the poem
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🙂 much appreciate the comment. Beth; and yes, that would have been frightening; I wonder how they came up with that phrase ‘a murder of crows’ ?
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Love this John. You were visited by a wise crow with sage advice.
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I wrote it all down, Bob, so I wouldn’t forget 🙂
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Nevermore
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hhh the Edgar Allan Poe crow 🙂
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Love this. Fantastic imagination. And I’m happy that I’m not the only one talking to birds.
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there are a few of us left in the world, Ulle 🙂
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I cant fully understand this poem but the parts I can are certainly beautiful!!! Good job!
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re-reading it, nor can I; I did the best I could with Hemingway’s ’roundelay’ like sentences 🙂
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I much preferred
The Old Man and the Sea
. . . but then
I’m no prize marlin 🌊😎
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Lol. I like his short stories, David —
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Isn’t it H who said —-a man can be destroyed but not defeated. You should make that crow, eat crow. Great poem, John.
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it may have been. Karen; not sure; but gee it was a difficult set of sentences to deal with —
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The line you walk with words like a trapeze; most would fall. Well done, here.
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thank you 🙂
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