
People walking up and down ,
walking off their sore heads from the night before,
mothers with their daughters, mothers with no one,
people locked on their mobiles,
missing the jaunty waves,
the graffiti of gull talk
and that gorgeous fluffy white spitz from McLaren Vale walking his owner
what’s his name? I ask.
Her, he corrects me. Evie.
Ahh I say after the song.
That’s right, he says. Evie, Parts 1,2 and 3.
And we give each other the thumbs up —
not many people know that —
& could start reminiscing when we saw Little Stevie & the Easybeats
but Evie is keen to get moving
just like Little Stevie who couldn’t keep still;
And above us, because
there’s a strong breeze,
there’s wind surfers flying around
like a dazzle of butterflies,
Now I’ve got Little Stevie Wright on my
mind, and it isn’t even Friday night😎
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good one, David 🙂 I’m sure you remember ‘Evie’ and from recollection it was a solo act & yes I did see him live 🙂
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He was an Aussie Superstar
(British born, as so many are).
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yes, he was, David; they had a string of hits as you know but he had a sad after life chronicled in the Jack Max book ‘Sorry’: a sad but riveting read
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There is a nice easy beat to this poem John.😊
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thanks Hobbo 🙂
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the graffiti of gull talk ….I love that line!
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thanks, Bob: that popped into my head and it just felt right; that’s what I’ve learnt from you: pepper your poem with, off kilter phrases 🙂
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Thanks John! 🙂
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A spirited, yet easygoing poem to start my Sunday, thanks John.
eden
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glad it put you in a good place, Eden 🙂
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You’ve painted an evocative picture. Do you live near these waters?
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I do indeed, Neil: just eight minutes drive to the beach; I have lived near the sea all my life 🙂
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lots of action and movement in this poem
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thanks for appreciating it, Beth 🙂
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Nice!!!
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Graffiti gull and windsurfer butterflies. Beautiful images that feel refreshing. Is this pier nearby?
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yes, only eight minutes drive away; I go there for a walk a few times a week; write poems there like ‘Evie’ 🙂
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Pier reminds me of the 70s faux fur boots-White and ready for the disco. 😉
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🙂 I love that simile: so original — I could have used it, damn ! 🙂
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I love this one, John. I missed it somehow, when you first wrote it. There are lovely images and a lovely easy feeling. Cruisy.
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thanks Worms; that’s how it was intended: gee, I wish I could write more often in this mode —
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This is a good one, John. A delightful, random conversation; an insouciant pup; musical reminiscences; plus ‘the graffiti of gull talk’ and ‘a dazzle of butterflies.’ Yum!
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