
There used to be a man, a hobo, who drifted in to our town.
He was selling peepholes from a brown burlap bag.
It was like a lucky dip.
You gave him a few coins and youβd reach in
& pull out a peephole.
You might get lucky, the man said.
You might pick out the one that looks into the universe the moment it was born
or the one that sees who took the Beaumont children
from Glenelg Beach on New Year Day, 1966.
Everyone wanted to know that, especially the parents.
But mostly we got ones that looked at the tree behind it or a flock of black clouds roaming like sheep
in the pasture of the sky.
One day he fell asleep against an old gum in the park
and we looked through his peepholes.
They were all the same,
None peered into a secret place.
They all looked at what was the other side of the peephole.
The man began to wake up.
We shoved the peepholes in his bag and ran off.
We didn’t need a peephole to see through him..
John , this is delightful.
I love the absurd imagery and cautionary nature of the poem.
Fantastic.
eden
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thanks Eden for being first cab off the rank; I had another poem from the archive to go up today but it will have to wait: this one really wanted to go up π
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This poem IS a peephole! A delightful peephole into the extraordinary ideas people have for making money. This was the original “Nigerian Prince leaves you a fortune” email. π. This poor old guy. Nothing better to sell than a lie. It’s a gorgeous tale. And like Eden said, the imagery has a magical quality. Lovely.
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thanks Worms: I’ve rewritten it as a 100 word flash fiction piece and have submitted it to ‘The Drabble’ π
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sounds like a lesson learned, and a tale of a rainmaker passing through town
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π we’re all a little gullible as kids π
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and many as adults
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sadly that is true, Beth, making us liable to be taken advantage of π¦
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Anything we have to press our eye to feels like a specialty; but thereβs more peepholes than mysteries these days. Hope to see this as a flash fully on The Drabble.
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true π it;s wonderful when a piece of writing can exist in two or more different forms π
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To be able to look at the universe the moment it was born β how great that would be!
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that would take the cake, Neil; nothing else would come close — unless it’s seeing the Face of God π
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Oh, my…very inventive and thought-provoking, John!
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thanks, Becky; my imagination went for a wild ride on this one; I could barely keep up π
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Sometimes that’s a good thing!
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Beautiful just beautiful! For some odd reason I come to think of todayβs politicians. Some of them most have been lucky to buy that magical one peephole. π
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yes, don’t know about BoJo though π
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Fantastic poem. I love the idea of a man selling peepholes. Thank you for sharing.
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thank you for commenting; glad you enjoyed it; it is good to get a new reader π
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Love this concept! I’d like to see you flesh it out more: peephole as metaphor, hobo as wise man. So much potential!
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thanks for that suggestion, Elaine: I’ll see if I can π
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boy, what a scammer he was!!!
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was he ever !!
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This is excellent; inspires many imaginative trails.
I always thought it interesting that ‘peephole’ sounds a lot like ‘people’…. Some give you a better peek at themselves than others.
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so true π
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