Give in.
That’s all you can do.
It’s like being bundled
in the boot
of a car,
taken by an alien
spacecraft.
You’re abducted, baby.
Whisked away
in the arms
of creativity.
Go with it.
Don’t freak out.
Forget appointments,
routines,
even food.
Work, paint, sing.
Whatever’s yr thing.
You’re abducted.
pic courtesy of The New Yorker
Totally hog-tied. Stopped yelping years ago. Great flow of lines, John. Enjoyed the writing and the art.
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thanks, K: it is like that: ‘hog-tied’ and a little frightening but like you, I stopped yelping years ago; well said 🙂
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Strong and brave. Nice. I am still whimpering here. I have a story due today that is not finished. Whip is getting cracked early.
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So good, John. When it comes to take me, I let
for who knows when it might
return.
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I agree; creativity like this is a rare thing 🙂
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embrace it –
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the only answer 🙂
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Very clever write my friend 👍🖤
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Just wish I could condense like you: that’s your specialty !
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Oh, I don’t know! You don’t do such a bad job yourself! 😁🖤
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I’m getting there 🙂
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😁🖤
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It feels like a song! Especially that closing line. Great flow!! 🙂
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thanks, Worms: I like my poems to have momentum —
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Hi John, hmm, I thought I left a comment but I don’t see it so I’ll leave another. 😦
I liked the poem John, even though it instils fear in me right now. Abduction against one’s will is a subject I’m grappling with … has to do with Canada’s Indigenous peoples and the discovery of unmarked graves of its children. Just a sad time . 😦
Hope you’re well,
eden
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I never thought of that aspect, Eden, and the same applies to our indigenous peoples, aborigines, and the word is forceful, and I’m sorry if it unsettles you; perhaps i need to find a less transgressive word to describe how Inspiration ‘abducts’ you —
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Oh no!
It’s definitely not for you to change the word or any part of your poem, John. It’s perfect as it is.
If I read your poem a month ago, I would feel differently.
To be abducted by inspiration sounds great just about now. xo
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there’s no better word for it, Eden; thank you 🙂
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I understand Eden’s comments because I’ve been following the Canadian situation on the news, and it is shocking. Writing which does not affect people at some level might as well stay bound and gagged in your skull. At least you raised the issue, even if unintentionally. Sometimes the dog needs to be poked! (Sorry Dauphy).
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thanks, Hobbo; I had no idea; we hear nothing about the Canadian issue here in Oz; too much focus on the pandemic: we’re sick of hearing about it ; the news had plenty of coverage on the Miami building collapse; surely they could have spent some time on the Canadian issue, Shame !
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So, your poem has got us discussing it, and that has to be a good thing! 👍
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that’s a very good point, Hobbo: it has certainly opened my eyes and those of my readers; sometimes poetry can perform a public function 🙂
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👍 Even making people laugh in these covid times can be a public service.
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you’re right, Hobbo: a lot of people are fed up with the pandemic, and its nasty impacts; we need light comedy, a bit of froth, some belly laughs 🙂
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🤣🤣🤣 Agree wholeheartedly!
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Maybe that’s my problem, I’m the leader of the resistance against my own creative urges…
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🙂 let go of that leadership role; sometimes we sabotage our own work 😦
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Excellent idea! 🙂
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Love this. Sometimes we try to hard to control and we should try to let go, go with the flow even if I mostly feel like an alien on planet Earth.
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sometimes it is good to feel like an alien, Ulle; you can offer a fresh perspective on events —
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That’s the true creative spirit.
Wouldn’t mind being abducted if it meant more isolated writing time.
Wonderful read, John! 🙂
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I’m thinking I need to be more of the abductor these days to attain some creativity.
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it can get like that, Chel, but then, when you least expect it …..
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Great set
Of lines and words. Just Keeps flowing and takes you to the end so gracefully. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more.
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:0 why, thank you; my writing improves ten fold when I’m ‘abducted’ 🙂
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Well then I’m sure my pictures and all will improve with an abduction ‼️😱😱when is the next abduction?😈and Can we pick who does it and where we go ⁉️😝 LOL 😝
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I will keep you posted 🙂 I went to visit your website but it appears it isn’t up yet —
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No I just started to get it going yesterday. So I’m a newbie. And need an abduction SOON!!!! 😝 LOL. Maybe that will kick the creative juices flowing again
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hahaha; let me know when your first post goes up; it;s a wonderful world: you’ll love it 🙂
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