
The fat crow caws
from the top
of the peppercorn tree
kraak kraak kraak
loud, loutish, laconic
& the bloke next door calls out
to his wife
what’s that, dear?
what’s that?
The fat crow caws
from the top
of the peppercorn tree
kraak kraak kraak
loud, loutish, laconic
& the bloke next door calls out
to his wife
what’s that, dear?
what’s that?
Ha ha ha. A very nice little poem. Made me chuckle out loud.
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it cracks me up every time I hear him in the backyard, calling out on cue 🙂 the wife must either be deaf or have a great sense of humor 🙂
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Hilarious! 😃
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🤣…and she replies, ‘It’s just that Malone feller next door writing his poems.’
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🙂 I know, Hobbo: I’m incurable and incorrigible 🙂
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🤣…and incorruptible!
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🙂 that’s a big call, Hobbo: I am but a human bean 🙂
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Ooh – hahahaha
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🙂 thanks Beth: glad you enjoyed it; I think his wife should bop him over the head 🙂
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yep!
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it could happen any day now; this poem may well have a sequel 🙂
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uh, oh. and remember that crows are very smart….
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Lovely alliteration, like luscious seeds sown secretly and gestating gorgeously in my mind. I’ll stop now 😂
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haha … you do it well 🙂
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The crow probably jolted him out of a deep sleep!
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that’s a very kind interpretation, Neil 🙂
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This is just so funny. I wonder how the next door mrs voice sounds like.
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🙂 yes, I’d like to hear her turn the tables on him 🙂
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Ha! This is fantastic. Oh man, I’ll have to ask my partner what animal call my voice most resembles. I’m sure there are times when all he hears is is “screech.” I’ll ask him and get back to you.
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yes; would like to hear; perhaps you or I could make a funny poem out of it 🙂
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He says I sound like a kookaburra. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UXA0-YAoo9Q&ab_channel=RickSchwartz. Oh man, laughing and crying now. It’s true.
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Lol, Just played the video. Man, you’ve set the bar high 🙂 a crow can’t compete with the richness of the kookaburra’s sound. Now can we get a poem out of this? that’s the question 🙂
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Well, I always knew I was kooky, but the burra part may take some imagination. 😂 Yes, could be. A poem may lurk in those laughs.
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Lol
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Hilarous..Nice
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thanks Kaycee; I appreciate that you found it ‘hilarious’ 🙂
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Haha! Hard to differentiate…
Very funny. 🙂
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