
There’s a cobweb on the rear view mirror
of my car,
the outside one so it’s a little mussed up
as you’d expect
in all that turbulence.
A new one goes up every second or third day.
I don’t know what he catches in it
except the past..
Like a passenger facing the wrong way
on a long distance train
he only sees where he’s been.
Maybe there’s a value in that:.
looking back.
A little nostalgia does no harm.
In fact we revel in it:
costume dramas, westerns like ‘Yellowstone’,
origin stories of super heroes,
biopics,
the little cobwebs studios weave
to hold our interest.
I love what the cobwebs of the past hold for us
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I notice there’s a trend in my posts of late: forests, apple carts and now cobwebs … what’s the next metaphor waiting for me just around the corner ? 🙂
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Love this. You always find the best metaphors.
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at this rate I’m gonna run out one day, Bob 🙂
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I’m going to disagree. I think you’ll have it for the long haul.
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thank you, Bob 🙂
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Better cobwebs than cracks, although they both do have the same effect of obstructing our view. Each word seems wise and well-selected. Another great thinker.
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yes, I enjoyed writing this one; actually I enjoy writing them all: that’s the trouble, there’s no stopping point —- except that one at the end 🙂
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Doubtful. Envision your pen waving even in the beyond. 😉
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Lol. thanks K: love that optimistic gloss 🙂
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Hey, eternity will require a lot of entertainment, John. 😀
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I like that, K; reminds me of that Righteous Brothers song: ‘Rock ‘N’ Roll Heaven’ —
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Ooh, good one. Adding to my queue. Thanks, John.
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just played it then; it’s an old song but it holds up well with a roster of dead stars performing in that rock ‘n’ roll heaven 🙂
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Nice circle of thought. Those busy little spiders keep us thinking. 🙂
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funny thing is , I never see the spiders; but they’re busy little buggers ’cause each time I bring the car back from A DRIve, the web’s wrecked so they have to start another; one night I’m going to sit surreptitiously in the car and watch them spin their magic 🙂
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ha ha. great idea. that would definitely be another poem.
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working on it 🙂
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Oh, shiny!I
What a great place to spin!
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well, it seems to keep them happy 🙂
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At first, I thought your mirror had been shattered, and ‘cobwebs’ were a metaphor for a broken past.
You are so clever, great play on words 😀
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that would have been too clever for me, Eden 🙂 thanks for the kind words 🙂
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That ending with is excellent. Really enjoyed this one
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thank you; I did not know what the ending would be till I got there 🙂 unlike the spider I had NO preconceived plan —
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A delicate web of wordplay. Simply wonderful.
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I get carried away sometimes, Hobbo. spinning my own little web 🙂
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Enjoyable fun, so long as you don’t get caught in it!
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This was beautiful 😀 cobwebs do interest me,their little patterns hold more mysteries than is apparent to the viewer 🙂
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I will have to have a closer look tomorrow morning 🙂
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“only sees where he’s gone” – lovely piece of observation
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thanks, Ian; the little buggers are probably spinning a new web now as we speak 🙂
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You’ve taken spiders and cobwebs to a whole different creative level, John. I must say – beautiful. 🙂
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that web — if you’ll excuse the pun, Terveen — really captured my attention 🙂
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Great one, John. Spiders and poets has the web spinning in common. Authors and poets spin their web of words to catch an unsuspecting reader. 🙂
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we certainly do, Ulle — and as you’ll appreciate — some of our webs are more successful at capturing readers than others: we are all searching for the secret ingredients 🙂
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Maybe the spider is doing dental work on his victims and needs the mirror.
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hahahaha, I like that 🙂
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