
After he had stormed off in his Volvo and got home to a torrent of texts, he responded with a fusillade of his own. It was like a naval battle at close quarters, with no quarter given. Someone was going down.
He got in the last word. That was unusual, Perhaps he had gone too far. He need not have said some of the things he said. One particular insult was, in retrospect, very cutting.
He texted a partial rebuttal before he hit the sack. No response. He texted again. And again. Perhaps he had gone too far. Had she…? O God no. It didn’t bear thinking about.
He buried his head under the pillow and tried to sleep. Eventually he crashed. But the nightmares ….
He awoke at six in the morning. His mobile lit up. His arm flew across to grab it. It was from her. A volley of vitriol.
He had never felt so happy.
ah, relief comes in all forms!
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hahahs; thanks Beth — you got it 🙂
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What a zinger that last line. Bravo in building an arch of your own in this one. Texts can seem more terrible, and yet it’s easier for me this way. I need time to warm in person. Do you prefer texting or talking, John? Does it change if you’re angry?
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thanks K:I carefully and cunningly worked towards that zinger; the edifice would collapse without it; I find texting easier too when angry: there’s the distance of time, and a chance to work towards a state of calm 🙂
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Yes, you truly created a moment and perhaps when we text we get a chance to say what we mean instead of what we feel.
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yes, nice distinction there — though it’s amazing how texts too can be misinterpreted —
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That is true. Ah well, they say once it’s out either on paper or verbally it has a meaning of its own controlled by the listener or the receiver.
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“There’s only one thing in the world
worse than being talked about, and
that is not being talked about.”
~ Oscar Wilde
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🙂 that Oscar knew a thing or two, David; silence, by contrast, is deafening and deleterious —
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Deliciously dry. You are the king of the last line.
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thanks Ian; I like to dabble now and then in Flash Fiction —
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You had me in suspense, and that last line! Well done!!
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thanks Bob; a lot was resting on that last line 🙂
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The last lines made me laugh in relief. I was hoping that it was just the silence before another wordy storm. Great idea and well written, John. 🙂
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thanks Terveen: I had much fun with this one 🙂
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Love it John! Did not expect the twist. 😀
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I really had a ball writing this one, Eden; thank you 🙂
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