
The last thing I do at night
before hitting the sack
is taking a peek,
and the first thing I do in the morning
after getting up
is to sneak another peek.;
the laptop is left on
so I can see at a glance
how many comments I’ve collected
since I last looked;
sometimes I go away with a full tummy,
other times I leave anxious,
afraid I failed to hit the mark,
the old lead balloon syndrome.
I know it’s unhealthy,
it’s not all about numbers
but it’s the performer in me—
you like to hear the applause,
& read the critics in the morning
- pic courtesy of pinterest
It’s hard for me to peek during the day, but I understand. I’m the worst at forgetting to respond to things at all. My overwhelm light goes off and it’s shut off. Ah well, it can’t be all that bad to just take a few peeks. π Clever one.
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π thanks K; I lightened up for this one; I imagine it represents many bloggers; hope I’m not at the extreme end [ a worried look] π¦
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Here’s one comment for your collection π Where’s that cute pic from?
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Pinterest.com. I typed in ‘Peeking’ and this pic came up along with many others π
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Wow! Never thought of doing that. Perfect pairing with your poem π
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thanks; I take considerable care with my pics; Pinterest is a good site
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The prevailing zeitgeist:
If you’re not jacked in π
to the virtual realm π
you just don’t exist π«
How did human existence
get reduced down to this? π»
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it’s a good question, David; but my poem represents the extreme end, I suggest — do others go beyond that??
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Love this
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why, thank you; it’s good to have a new reader π
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I’ll have to one of my friends
who’s teenage kids stays all day
on line in a darkened room?
Fortunately for the more sensible,
such as us, John, the internet trap
in no problem ππ
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that’s true; we grew up without it; but all day in a darkened room seems a little more extreme than my peeking π and as you say, how did it come to this?
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I think what youβre doing is fine, and not unhealthy at all. You care about your product, and itβs always good to have feedback and know if youβre making a difference. Itβs a wonderful way to connect to other writers. Great piece by the way. π₯°
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π that’s true, Eden: I do care about my product and I do want to connect; where I don’t — like ‘Some Men’ –I examine why —
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I understand. Who, after all, wants to write in a vacuum?
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totally right, Neil; you need an audience
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I love how you write about these things, like worrying about comments (which I do too). No one else does this. Well done!
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you’re right, Bob, they don’t; I like writing about topics that are often overlooked fora whole range of reasons: embarrassment, squeamishness …
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That’s what I love about your writing!
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It’s only natural, John. Those who deny it are singing a crooked song. May the applause be deafening. π
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Lol; I watch myself doing this regularly, had a sly little chuckle, thinking, I bet others do this and off I went π
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Great one! Itβs a hard not to care for the likes and comments and you put words to this so well. There is of course a boring scientific explanation containing dopamine but yourβs is better. π
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hahaha; thanks Ulle π I watch myself doing this so could write about it easily π
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Haha π funny piece
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so glad you enjoyed it; had fun writing it π
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I’m a peeker too. But the numbers aren’t it for me. I just like the community. Seeing what people are saying/sharing. I used to worry about the numbers a lot and occasionally I still think about it. But something changed. I’m not sure what. But the writing I see and do and the community are definitely what attracts me to blogging.
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I’m changing, Worms; I would rather honest feedback; I used to expect reciprocity when I made comments; now I’ve out grown that; I like poetry like yours that is willing to experiment with language; it doesn’t always hit the mark for me but when it does I will say so —
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