
Reminiscing Rainbows
We were reminiscing rainbows at the writers’ workshop when the mentor
snapped: Get out of the picture. You’re spoiling the view. Let the vision
remain. So I did. I got out and wrote this:
A bright rainbow
scythes
the air:
a gentle crop
of rain
Wonderful
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thanks, Beth — and great advice 🙂
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Stunning! I think you made the picture better ❤️ beautiful rainbow! 🌈
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thanks LaShelle; that bossy mentor 🙂
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Got it! Love it!! Perfectly nailed it 🤩
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Perfect!
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thanks, Bob —
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Reread this again this morning. Just fantastic.
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I very rarely get a comment like this; thanks Bob 🙂
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I love your use of the word “scythes.” It’s a perfect visual. 😀
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thanks Eden —
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Delightful fall images, John. What wonderful advice.
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thanks K; I must listen to that bossy mentor a little more 🙂
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Sometimes getting out of the way is better. A lovely one, John. 🙂
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yes; I reckon my mentor’s onto something 🙂
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Like this one, a lot.
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thank you 🙂
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