
Siberia
We arrived late at night. That may have been the reason.
Or maybe our reputation preceded us.
Either way we ended up in Siberia, Room 313 , the furthest most room from the front desk, next to the storage area.
Adele, the desk clerk, wasnβt much help. In her effort to be genial, she often hit the wrong note.
Eventually, we got our keys and lugged our baggage down the long, long corridor, the shadows across the carpet hulking and ominous.
By the time we got to our room we were stuffed,
We stripped off and hopped beneath the covers of the king size bed.
Thatβs when I realized we had company.
The figure beside me shifted uneasily
Cold there? Or maybe just shivering… superb twist. A stranger in the dark gets me every time.
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thanks K; I really appreciate your comment; I’m getting bored by things I do easily and like you I’m stretching my craft —
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yikes!!!!
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hahahaha; I’m sending this one off to ‘The Drabble’, Beth; we will see π
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it’s a good one!
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thanks, Beth; I’ve had 4 or 5 published there so I stand a chance π
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Whoa!
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thanks; it has the right amount of creep π
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Tell us more!
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ha ! I know how you feel, Neil; but it’s written to a 100 word limit so it can be picked up by a Flash Fiction website ; the story has to hint rather than tell —
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Excellent! That ending was such a surprise. Love how it leaves us unsettled.
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thanks, Bob π I’ve sent it off to ‘The Drabble’; we shall see —
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Fingers crossed!
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Master stroke
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thank you; I tinkered with every detail to get just the right effect π
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Yikes is right! Thought you were just being melodramatic till the punch line!
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the place really was that creepy; I thought of referencing ‘The Shining’ but decided the tale could stand on its own two feet —
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They provide King size beds
in your Gulag?! Don’t tell
Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn π€«
for pity sake. He’d be so jealous.
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it was an ‘upmarket’ Siberia, David, permitting us the ‘privilege’ of paying π you don’t always get that option π
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This needs to be continued… an unexpected bed partner can mostly never be good. Haha! π
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it’s the first tale in a collection I’m putting together, Terveen; the current post will be the second —
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I love the ending John! The unknown is what scares me the most!
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me too, Eden —
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