Raymond who ? she said .
Raymond Carver , I replied , the American
short story writer and poet .
Never heard of him , she said
and being a year eight standard I was inclined
to believe her .
And yet it was startling how Carveresque
her writing was .
Phrases like “ I will never know where — what
shall I call him — this man has gone “
spring particularly to mind .
And I thought of the nine year old boy who wrote
like the Dickens in Pickwick Papers , for instance ;
another who wrote florid full-on verse
like Chris Marlowe
and the highly strung girl who came for one term
and wrote like Emily Bronte
though none had ever read these writers
and the year nine autiste who at times
wrote like them all .
Sylvia who ?
the manic depressive from the back
of the class called
black hair slashed across her face
as I read the opening lines of her poem
to her father
fuelled with fury and neo-Nazi imagery .
Never mind , I said
as I wondered whether the ghosts
of dead writers
had come to inhabit the young
and whether over the next few years
I’d meet an embryonic
Will Shakespeare
an Oscar
or antipodean Dostoevsky .
Collect their juvenilia .
One day I’ll make a killing
*pic courtesy of pinterest
interesting observations
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thanks Beth; when you teach a bright Year 9 English class expect the unexpected: they were exuberant,a pleasure to teach — and they loved writing 🙂
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sounds like a wonderful bunch
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they were, Beth; I sometimes think of them; none tmk have made it as writers — yet 🙂
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These lines have me thinking…
as I wondered whether the ghosts
of dead writers
had come to inhabit the young
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it is a sort of spooky thought, Bob; it was an interesting year, intellectually stimulating ; I even at times felt threatened by their awesome promise —
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That’s a good thing. Glad it went well.
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I understand this. My father was an art teacher. I heard him tell these stories, but the names were those of artists, like Kahlo, Dali, Pollock, Klimt, and the like. I never considered that it might apply to writers as well. Hmmmm…..
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we’ll see if any of them make it; I would recognize their names still if they ‘popped up’
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I hope they do!
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This is witty and spooky with a huge question mark. I’d say keep in touch with them, John. Opportunity is writing you a very clear message. Haha! 🙂
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It is spooky, Terveen, esp the one like Sylvia Plath; I’m watching out for her 🙂
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A thought provoking piece. Begs the question what makes a famous author, or artist. Is it only chance, that tiny moment to be discovered. After that is it only mass psychosis creating the great classics? How many undiscovered authors and poets roam the internet. Who will be the classics from our time? I bet John Malone will be one of them.
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gee, Ulle; hope you’re right; better keep the standard up then and keep pumping out NEW material 🙂
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There’s a short story somewhere in this observation for sure!
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actually, Matthew, I’m looking for material for a short story to write and your comment has provided me with an idea I never considered; thanks 🙂
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I think that would be a cracker, John. Quite an intimidating class to teach, I would imagine!
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I couldn’t get away with anything with that lot, Matthew — and, for interest sake,I have not come across any story using that premise 🙂
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Nice lines.. a little bit confusing
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thanks Kaycee; I can see how it can be —
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What a fun class!
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Very interesting observations, John. You probably notice them as you’re so well read. I’ve always wondered if the book I want to write has already been written. Hasn’t it all been said before one way or another? We just say it differently because we don’t want to inadvertently copy another writer we’ve read in the past.
I’m not sure sometimes.
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you have your own voice, Eden; even if you cover similar territory you will tell it in your unique way; your ‘voice’, unlike those fifteen year olds, would be fully formed; no one writes like you —
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I am rather behind in reading blog posts – well if I am honest, in many things this year. But this post particularly caught my attention and so I must respond.
That may well be, as others have said, a particularly gifted class of budding writers but as we all know, they require somebody to push them forward – a gifted teacher/listener/encourager. John Malone perhaps!
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true; that was some years ago; they’ve all gone their own way in the world; one loses touch but I still hope that I’ll come across a book with their name on it in a bookshop 🙂 hey! and thanks for responding —
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