
Someone’s been out in the garden
between the evening and the dawn.
I wonder what it was.
A rabbit or a fawn?
Yes, someone’s been in the garden
in the depths of the dark.
Someone fleet and nimble
who have left their mark.
Someone’s been in the garden
before the day was born —
the Xmas elf of Davis Court? —
& from their roots all weeds have torn,
Aliens……
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hahahaah; I’ll pay that one, Don
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Cute poem!
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thanks, Beth; it’s seasonal —
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Perhaps it was Rudolph, doing a trial run!
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Lol; I wished I’d thought of that funny ending π
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a possum left similar marks (but no veggies) in our veggie garden…
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ha ! you can’t have everything π
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Ha ha.
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Why, could be tracks of unicorn or a wrong address stop of the Polar Express? You will have to keep us posted on further developments, John. You just must. π
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love these whimsical wonderings; will keep you posted; and yes, loved to ‘The Polar Express’, one of my favourite Xmas films π
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Itβs a favorite here as well. Thanks for keeping the smile train going.
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rummaging through a notebook from last year I came across ‘Mr. Daniel’s Poetry Peephole’ and ‘The Judas Tree’; enjoying another read π
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You have a garden or is it fictional!
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ha ! I do have a garden π but the gazebo is fictional —
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Thatβs great!
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π
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Most definitely elves. Or a small army of robot spiders? Love this…got me wondering.
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A good mystery to keep the words on their toes. π
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Lol
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I hope it wasn’t Krampus, Santa’s dark sidekick.
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had to look him up; you wouldn’t want to meet him in the dark !
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Krampus is from Austria but if misspelled he might end up in Australia! π
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I’ll ask my son about Krampas; he’s from Austria and he’s coning down to Oz for a week or so in the New Year to spend time with us π
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I bet heβs always been good and never had to deal with Krampusπ
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Intriguing, John. A repeat visitor or a one-off?
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a one off; the Xmas elf of Davis Court ? mysterious —
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So … I read this and heard Ella Fitzgerald’s voice, and then I completely forgot what could’ve invaded your garden! I’ve rarely read a rhyming poem from you, so this was delightful π
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thank you so much, Eden; I write them from time to time; I wish I could write more but I slip into the non-rhyming mode more readily ; I meant to ask you, Eden, what Ella Fitzgerald song my poem reminded you of? So often , especially when we’re on a roll, our writing subconsciously channels other writings, like songs —
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The name of the song is “In the Wee Small Hours of the Morning”. Many artists have sung it, including Ella (my fave), but the most famous version is probably by Frank Sinatra. π It’s a lovely song.
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ahh yes; I reckon I know it ; thanks
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Deer
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not down our way; that would be magical —
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