
Allayed.
They took me up the steps
after the hall emptied
and pulled aside the heavy curtain.
And
there it was
in the centre
of the stage,
wide and welcome as a smile
a bath
tub egg yolk yellow
rim robin blue.
My fears were allayed.
Allayed.
They took me up the steps
after the hall emptied
and pulled aside the heavy curtain.
And
there it was
in the centre
of the stage,
wide and welcome as a smile
a bath
tub egg yolk yellow
rim robin blue.
My fears were allayed.
Baptism? No. Then the hall wouldn’t have emptied. An odd, oddly positioned gift? A new ceremony performed after a Rotary Club meetings?
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you were right the first time, Worms; a look behind the curtain at the mechanics; I had never witnessed a ‘full’ baptism —
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Ahhhh. :-). I understand. Yes, I suppose having a bath in a church does require a bit of logistics! I never really thought about it too deeply.
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nor had I;i t was a learning experience; you may hear more of it — poetically rendered, of course π
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Surprise
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I’ve been working towards it for a while, part of my journey π
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I have to admit I couldn’t put my finger on what the object was till I read Worm’s comments. Now that I know, makes a lot of sense. Well done.
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thanks Bob; you must be building up for a post by now π
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I am. Taking a kind of recharging break. Doing a lot of reading. I’ll be back at it soon. Thanks.
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look forward to it, Bob π
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Thanks!
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Baptism by water is preferable to fireπ
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hahahahaha; I’ll pay that π
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π£ππ
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That’s a pretty picture. Hope you were smiling too. Love the word play. π
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thanks Terveen; the robin blue rim did it for me π
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These Robin blue eggs caught my attention. Thanks for sharing this idea. . Let’s follow our blogs. Anita
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thanks Anita; will check yours out now π
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I love that combination of colours.
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yes, it was very warm and welcoming: like colours from childhood π
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or IKEA if the blue were a bit darker π
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What’s this in prose? It sounds intriguing but I’m not sure I get it even after reading all the comments.
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ah that’s the baptismal tub, baptism through immersion like John the Baptist did to Jesus in the River Jordan —
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So the blue is the river and the yellow the sand? Vivid!
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well, yes; you’re ahead of me; I guess it is π my big day is tomorrow
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Wow! Good luck!
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thanks π
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