
Jonah.
One moment the house is all lit up.
The next it is plunged
into darkness
as though hit with a heart attack.
I scramble around the black cavern
of the sitting room
for the door handle.
I have to get out
amongst the stars
out with my beautiful garden,
the pig weed and the white magnolias.
I sit down on my little bench
by the birdbath
and catch my breath.
Now I knew how Jonah felt
when swallowed by that whale.
A power failure John? Beautifully described – houses are oppressive at times, they do seem to swallow us suddenly when the lights fail.
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yes, power outage; only lasted a minute; spooky though: all the houses around were in darkness —
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Well written. Thank goodness for pigweed and white magnolias. They felt like a real coming home.
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thanks Worms; originally written in the past tense, I switched to the present to give it more immediacy —
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we have been dealing with massive outages here after the heavy winter storms and it changes everything in an instant –
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I’ve heard about your bad winter and the outages. I still have a childish fear of sudden darkness. And yes, it does happen in an instant —
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very understandable
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Excellent. “Now I knew how Jonah felt” That really ties it all together.
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thanks, Bob; the Jonah and the whale image has been with me for some time; finally I found the poem that could use it 🙂
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Power failures here are frequent enough that we have a generator wired into the house to power the essentials. You do learn to adjust but I always find that life goes on immediate hold. With Fiona we were out for over a week (and were among the fortunate). All that aside – I love this poem! It draws one into the very sudden and immediate change of circumstances. Jonah and the whale is brilliant.
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thank you so much; writing it in the present tense gave it the immediacy I felt it needed —
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I can understand you completely here, John. I just went through a power cut 5 minutes back. I was groping my way around the house hoping to get away from the oppressive darkness
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yes, sudden darkness is oppressive; I feel that I captured it —
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Glad you got out, John. Power outages are always ugh! Something about the forced darkness and the accompanying disruptions.
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that is for sure; material for a story, Terveen ?
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Haha. I need to write this down. Thanks John. 🙂
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look forward to seeing the results if it pans out 🙂
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They say you should face your fears but but you can’t in the darkness.
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haha; well put, Ulle 🙂
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Very evocative! I used to rather enjoy the sudden darkness and silence of a power cut… provided it wasn’t mosquito season! Now we’re on solar, and we monitor our system carefully. So it’s been years since we experienced that sudden plunge into darkness.
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I must think about going solar now. I’ve got the mother of all blackouts being posted soon. Stay tuned 🙂
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Houses having metaphorical heart attacks. Your writing is marvelously off-beat.
–Shay
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thank you 🙂 I’m a quirky guy; don’t always hit the jackpot though: I ditch a post now and then 🙂
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Don’t we all!
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I much prefer the light too and darkness is good only when I’m sleeping. 😀
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yes, you definitely need subdued light at the most when you’re sleeping —
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