
Dambo.
I want to be a gangly recycle artist like Dambo,
the builder of wooden trolls.
Instead of discarded furniture, I use discarded poems,
snippets I’ve copied down in my commonplace books,
bits and pieces on suffering coz I know what’s that like now.
All the best poems have been written, Daz says.
He’s the one who wrote ‘The Parable of the Albino Pigeon’
so I listen.
“About suffering they were never wrong the Old Masters’,
says Auden, and I added:
while someone is bringing in the bins, watching ‘Bullet Train’
on Binge, or cleaning the car of dogs’ fur like my neighbour
who asks, Hey Bro, how’s it hanging? Do I even want to answer that?
‘This seeing the sick endears them to us, us too it endears’
says Hopkins in ‘Felix Randall’
who taught me empathy;
and those lines from Mary Oliver;
‘Someone I once loved
gave me a box full of darkness.
It took me years to understand
that this too was a gift’.
You can’t better that, Daz would say.
So is cancer a gift?
Anyhow I want to build my wooden trolls of poems
coz like Daz says, the best poems have all been written.
pic courtesy of pinterest
I like the kind of rambly, circular nature of this. I did get a little lost in the middle – wasn’t sure who was talking. Was it still Daz? (about the dog fur, Bullet Train, etc). But I really relate to the collecting of bits that speak to you in this traumatic time. A collage, of sorts. And I love the ending.
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thanks so much, Worms. I wanted to write a big poem, at least twenty lines ; and I threw everything at it, I wanted to say what was building up in me and I wasn’t overly concerned about logic; like you say it’s a ramble but everything’s connected; I wanted nothing to slow t down: I wanted it to race along like a bullet train 🙂
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Fair enough. Like a river at a waterfall. Or perhaps a dam? The emotions of dealing with cancer sure are big.
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anyhow I got out what I wanted to say; made a few small alterations; took your advice ; thanks Worms; not getting much love —
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It’s a quiet day in blog world
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Desk stand are in order👏🏻 Knocked this one out of the park!🏏 It’s a rich multiverse all of its own, with many self-contained curiosities at every corner. And your free write is a flowing force🌊🐼
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I love the way you describe this post; many, many thanks !!!
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The box full of darkness is intriguing. I might have to ponder on that to a while. May I steal that image?
My littlest grandson used to keep an empty orange juice carton in the fridge. He called it his box of air. From time to time he would pull it out, open it and breathe the chilled air it contained. Then he’d close it back up and return it to the shelf on the door.
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I like that: his ‘box of air’; yes, of course, you may use that image; will be interesting to see the result —
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Thank you sir. I’m still mulling it over. I don’t know if it should be viewed as sinister or as an aid to napping?????
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hahahah; whatever trajectory you take, I’m looking forward to the read 🙂
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Really like this one. You ask great questions. Especially the discarded poems. I do that sometimes, just find bits and pieces of what I’ve written and put them together. I guess it’s my way of cutting and pasting. I don’t know if everything’s be written. I would lean to say no.
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yes, it is a form f cutting and pasting; and I lean on you side too, Bob: our Daz can get a little dogmatic —
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I love how you have taken all these different lines by others and wove them with your thoughts into this outstanding poem. I didn’t know who Dambo was, so I googled him, such amazing art. I also found out the word dambo means seasonal waterlogged wetlands. Kind of like the emotion expressed in this poem. Did you intend a double innuendo with the title?
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thank you; I wasn’t aware of that; you researched well; any double innuendo was unintended —
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You are welcome. I thought Dambo seemed like an Australian word, so my curiosity took me a little further than just the artist.
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I’m impressed; I’m always impressed by people who put in research ; a pastor did that in our local church and produced a remarkable talk on Sunday; I may post this a little later today —
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Wow, how very cool
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so glad you like it, Beth; pushed the boundaries with this one but it was an exciting write 🙂
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Gathering the bits and pieces to make sense of that which is branded incomprehensible. I admire your attitude and cleverness in this emotional and beautiful piece of writing. Take care, John. 🙂
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I will, thanks Terveen; I was determined not to write another piddling poem; I set myself the task of writing at least a 20-liner,, something audacious
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I’m rooting for you, John. Please continue. 🙂
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that’s lovely, Terveen; thank you; nothing’s going to stop me now; just call me ‘Bullet Train’ 🙂
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Cancer does change one’s perspective of one’s own mortality. It’s not a bad thing, especially as you’re asking the questions and creating pieces like this.
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totally agree, Eden; I couldn’t have written this without the empathy I’ve acquired — the journey continues 🙂
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I’m sure the best poem is still to be written and if I was a betting man I would bet on you. Suffering seems to trigger the artist inside us. I guess when we stare down the abyss we like to make a remark before we fall. Like the part about suffering being a gift. After all you don’t like all the presents on Christmas.
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hahaha; so true ; I like your comment about falling down the abyss and making that last irreverent riposte 🙂
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Wow. I really love this poem. I love how you are processing all that’s happening to you in such a beautiful way. That Mary Oliver quote…wowza. Heavy and beautiful—the stuff of life.
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thanks so very much, Bridgette : I threw everything I had into this poem —
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