
Mystery Ships.
When he gets up to go to the toilet in the middle of the night,
she’d be there
or on the way back to his room after pausing in the kitchen
for a glass of milk,
she’d be in the hallway,
with her axolotl stare.
Time after time.
Passing ships in the night.
He’d look at her, and she at him,
sometimes a twitch of understanding, affection,
then they’d both look away.
After eight years, off and on,
they were still a mystery to each other.
Her cat. Not his.
They’d never bonded.
Oh this says so much John. A beautiful piece of writing that will stay with me all day.
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that’s lovely, Kate: the sort of response every writer would like in response to their work 🙂
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Thanks for sharing this idea. This cat is staring at you. Anita
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thanks Anita; It is: probably after food 🙂
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love this and so true to life
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Pirate ships in the night, even. Trying to steal her affections. I love axolotl stare. Looked it up. Yep.
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thanks K; that’s the only alteration — apart from the line format —I made to the original —
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Try feeding the thing. I know
cats 🐱 are fussier than dogs 🐶
in who’s company they keep . . .
still, the way to a cat’s heart
is through it’s stomach 🍗 😻
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hahah; yes, we do, David, my partner and I but at the appropriate time; you can’t always march to the whim of a cat —
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Try Tuna.
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hahah; yes, that should work 🙂
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When it comes to my moggie, who goes
crazy for that catnip (otherwise known as
meowijuana) I guess I’m cat whipped 🐱
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love the puns you slipped in there, David 🙂
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This is sad and cute at the same time.
I love it. Making me think too much 😊
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oh dear; we don’t want that; but glad you liked it 🙂
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I’d keep my distance from a cat any day. So cold… the cat, your writing is inviting as usual. 😊
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thanks Terveen: I’ve always been a dog person;
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I agree with K. The axolotl stare is a great line! And with the general sentiment… there is something in the simple telling of this that reflects so much on our interactions with other species. THe human world has few surprises these days with all that is available on the internet but interactions with other species … so much guesswork. Thanks for a thought provoking read.
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thanks , Worms; the axolotl crept in during the refurbishing phase but it felt right, so I kept it 🙂 I’ve got so much archival material to draw upon most of which most of you have not seen —
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You never can tell with cats. We have three. They certainly have minds of their own.
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you have to admire their independence —
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Axolotl stare – love it!
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🙂 that seems to be a popular line —
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I enjoy the understanding between these two, it seems to fall somewhere between disdain, tolerance and a mutual acknowledgment of circumstances. “Her cat. Not his.” sums it up beautifully. Cat’s probably thinking “Her man. Not mine.”
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hahahha; nicely described 🙂
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😄 Had you read the “The Horse and his Boy”? That cat is straight out of Chronicles of Narnia.
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no I haven’t; will look it up —
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That cat has a cutest stare! Great poem, John!
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thank you Jennifer 🙂
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Those eyes remind of light houses. I can totally understand why you are at bay and thinking of ships. She probably warns you with her eyes, stay away, stay safe, rocky shores ahead!
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that is a BRILLIANT explanation; thanks Shaily
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Really love this one, John. Cats have a way of judging us, don’t they? Of seeing us and somehow making us feel conscious. It’s those eyes!
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yes, they are quite probing —
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I appreciate cats for their mysterious nature. 😀
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same here, Eden; can’t warm to them but they fascinate me —
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