The Mothering Tree.
It’s the place where cars like to park in the heat of the evening before
being driven into their kennels at night.
It’s where walkers like to pause for a few cooling minutes before continuing
their hike ’round the ‘hood.
The scruffy ibis like it too congregating for a chat before the ginger tom
moves them on.
In the afternoon the mothering tree dozes under its enormous
sun hat.
When I buy a house I’m going to buy one with a mothering tree
just like the one in our street.
The mothering tree is and sounds loving.
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yes, it’s a beautiful, loving tree: it embraces all, even the scruffy ibis π
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everyone needs a mothering tree nearby
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yes, Beth: that is so right π a tree like that would never fall during a storm —
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a beautiful capture, John…. in words and image π€
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thanks Destiny: I just thought such a tree with its wide embracing arms and abundant leaves should be honoured π
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most certainly…like Beth says too… everyone needs a mothering tree nearby…somehow a comfort seen π€
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You have an observant eye John which sees that which is hidden in everyday life. An intriguing concept, uniquely shared in true Malone fashion. Keep them coming!
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thanks so much . Brian, for such a supportive comment: I believe I’ve done the tree proud; and yes, I will keep them coming π
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It’s a great tree, John. I took a picture of a jacaranda tree that is similar to this. It was in bloom and I want to paint it.
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I hope you do, Roberta; as you know I can’t even draw; I love and respect your art ; I get a kick when a post is accompanied by a sketch or painting —
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Hi John, thank you. I only started drawing and painting in March last year. I’ve never tried before then. I enjoy it very much now.
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Wow! you’ve learnt such a lot in so short a time !!
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I always liked art and I always did the cake and fondant art. I am self-taught but I’ve done it for years.
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I remember your cake and fondant art from recent posts; they are delightful π
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Thank you. I am currently attempting a Monet as a cake. If it works out, I’ll share – smile.
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I got my fingers crossed, Roberta π
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Beautiful way to think of a tree.
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thank you: good to get a new reader π
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Most welcome John.
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Itβs hard to believe how wide that tree is. Amazing.
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think of its massive root system, Neil: that tree will never be felled in a storm !
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That’s a fabulous tree. She deserves a poem. Glad you wrote it.
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yes, I like to honor everyday things in my poems, from tiny three-cornered jacks to giant, sweeping trees —
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Is this tree indigenous to your country? Do you know the name? It’s so full and squat that I’m amazed its short trunk can support the widest branches. To call it a mothering treeβis perfect, really. π
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I have no idea, Eden; I will ask and get back to you —
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It’s sort of a sad poem. “When I buy a house” … the poem almost suggests that that day is long off, and the longed-for home is just a mirage on the horizon … Everybody needs a home. I live in a crappy little room and I am on the verge of getting the F. OUT … I just have to complete my diet and then I’m going to begin hitting on chicks and moving in with them … I personally am looking forward strenuously to my future.
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hey ! that’s great. We all need a place of our own. And yes, one has to manage their diet; what goes into the body is vitally important: it determines what comes out of it: how much energy,,goodness …..
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My friend, this is beautiful! I LOVE trees and this βmothering treeβ and your exquisite poem make me wish for my own. There is just something spiritual to me about trees. βMothering Treeββperfection, John!
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thanks Karla: we all need our own ‘mothering tree;’ π
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Itβs my pleasure, John. Iβm trying to find your email, my friend. I canβt find it!
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John you saw this mothering Tree and so photogenic. Anita
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thank you, Anita: as Beth said, every street should have one π
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Delightful on how you described how various creatures benefit from this treeβs loving shade. And extra delightful is calling garages as βkennelsβ π
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haha; thanks Dave; I was conscious of needing to put up a buoyant post after ‘The Lighter’ which was a bit of a downer —
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You know I have a soft spot for tree’s and this is just fantastic. ‘Mothering tree’ it’s just so brilliant.
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thanks Ulle: it is a remarkable tree; I’m thinking of working this post into something a littl different, expanded —
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What a fantastic tree – it does look motherly too!
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thanks Kim: I’m thinking on working this into something bigger —
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That tree has personality. Iβm sure that there is more to say about her.
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there sure is; thanks Kim: we’ll see what eventuates: I’m working on it —
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I look forward to reading it!
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Elaboration on the mothering tree amazingly
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thanks, aana, it’s a poem very dear to me: I’m trying to make it into something bigger, a picture book, perhaps — bit it hasn’t gelled yet —
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All the best John! π
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I’m not done with the poem yet: think of this as a first draft —
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I wonder if all mothering trees smile when we take refuge
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π now that is an interesting thought; I’m scouting for new ideas to expand this into, maybe, a picture story book for children —
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A picture story book sounds amazing. Let’s see the mothering tree smile ππ
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Lol; I’m working on it π
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