Bath
A boat-shaped vessel with room for one ;
when you clamber into a bath ,
you are
captain,crew, passenger
rolled into one —
yet baths
require no special skills
nor do they stand on ceremony ;
in this they are like
some beaches — dress is entirely optional ;
entering a bath
you enter a topsy-turvy world
where water fills the craft not surrounds it —
though baths will never sink ;
head back , you settle down but are going nowhere—
baths have no destinations
nor sails and are permanently in
dry dock —
yet people
have been known to drift off
in baths emerging
rosy skinned and luminous as if
fresh from a voyage .
- pic by pinterest
Everything you say here is true.
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thanks, it’s one from the archives, rearranged a little looser —
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I’m always ready to set sail in the tub. I like drifting there whenever I can.
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I must try it again some day; somehow I drifted away from baths and the little voyages I went on; you don’t travel far in showers, which reminds me ….. do I post my ‘Showers’ poem written a few hours after ‘Bath’ presenting the case for and against —
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Oh, yes. Please do. Or if you want things to get steamy, you could make us all wait until tomorrow for that one. I rekindled my romance with a bubble bath during Covid. It’s lasted longer than most affairs…
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hahahahahahahahaha; that’s a wonderful quip 🙂
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Love this John!
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thanks Kate: it’s the first poem I had published in the National Teacher’s English Journal; it launched me as a poet in schools; I wrote a poem on Showers too presenting the alternative view: it’s not as good but I still may post it —
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Post it please – I would love to see your poem on showers John
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found it, Kate: I’ll post it tomorrow —
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Excellent John! I’ll read it tomorrow. Isn’t it awful when we lose art? I have just fired up an old defunct laptop praying that it contains the photo I’m chasing from several years ago.
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yes, I’d be lost if my lap top failed; I have got backup on all my poems though; my editor taught me that —
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love this and I love baths
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thanks Beth: it was where I was at thirty odd years ago 🙂
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I can’t find the right words to say how much I love this piece
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thank you, Mimi 🙂
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You know, I haven’t taken a bath in years (I’m a shower person). After reading your poem, though, I think that I might!
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me too, Neil: ‘Shower’ poem going up tomorrow !
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I love this, John. A bath adventure.
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thanks Roberta: your post was the prompt 🙂
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I thought so.
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Somehow baths never provide the refreshing of a shower especially when you are the last kid in the family to use it!
Stay too long and you skin wrinkles like a prune. But I still loved your take on the experience. Such imagination John!
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thanks Brian: I’m with you; well said; it will be interesting to see how much love ‘Showers’ receives compared to ‘Baths’ when I post it tomorrow —
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Haha. Brilliant, John. ” where water fills the craft not surrounds it” is a great line. I might have to soak in the tub today. Also, a great place to think up ideas.
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actually you’re right: that’s something that could have gone into the poem: next rewrite, Bob — with due attribution, of course 🙂
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I’m a shower person, but you make a bath sound very enticing!
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thanks Eden: putting up a shower poem today 🙂
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Simply fantastic, John. I think that entering a bath reminds us of our mothers womb. You capture it perfectly.
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thanks Ulle: that’s a great comparison !!!
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Let’s all “soak” in John’s amazing words! Brilliant, my friend. I emerge a raisin if I soak too long. You know how to describe the things of life so beautifully, my friend!
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hanks Karla; I’m putting up a Shower poem later today presenting an alternative viewpoint: it too is fun 🙂
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Oh how awesome!! Love it! 🙌
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I like how you inverted the bath as a boat, but with the water inside it. Your poem and the photo of Charlie Chaplin made me realize that if we wear clothes in the bath, we can skip doing laundry. A time saver to clean several things at once!
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I like the way you see things, Dave 🙂
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Thanks John!
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Love this! My favorite thing is to read in the bath tub. I’ve been known to add hot water multiple times if the book is too captivating. A journey indeed!
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yes, I used to read in the bath ’till I dropped a book in it 😦 a very soggy read indeed 😦
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thanks; will check it out —
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Same you
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“Oh, every day when I
Make my way to the tubby
I find a little fellow who’s
Cute and yellow and chubby
Rub-a-dub-dubby!”
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lol; love it —
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