I used to like my poems neatly wrapped.
I thought of them as artifacts.
Pristine, well presented, spruce
But now I like them ramshackle, loose,
keen to slouch in seedy places,
tie undone, inquisitive with loose shoe laces.
I used to like my poems neatly wrapped.
I thought of them as artifacts.
Pristine, well presented, spruce
But now I like them ramshackle, loose,
keen to slouch in seedy places,
tie undone, inquisitive with loose shoe laces.
And yet, you kept this one neatly metered. 🙂
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thanks Chelsea
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Sounds like a good process. Maybe you had to learn the rules first, to understand when to break them. Inspiring.
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Maybe we all need to work through this process
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Nicely done 👍🖤
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