
Showers acupuncture skin , pummel
angry muscles
into submission ;
like coffee they
kick-start us into action ,
the quick fix , the jab for our frenetic times but
they are ill suited
to contemplation or insight —
Archimedes
would have discovered nothing under a shower ;
nor are they
conducive to knowledge ; you cannot
read under showers nor
can you write unless it is wet verse ;
moreover showers only cater
for one side at a time — leaving the
other blue with cold ;
in this
baths are more inclusive immersing us
like icebergs with only
the head above water ;
showers have
much to learn ;
young upstarts , they lack the noble
ancestry of baths yet
arrogantly tower above them ; their heads
must constantly be lowered
* which do you prefer: showers or baths? * if you were asked to write a bath poem what would your opening lines be?
I definitely prefer myself baths!!!
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I used to but now I can’t be bothered π
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Love this. It grabs your attention from the first line with “acupuncture” (amazing verb choice). A neat answer to the shower vs. bath question
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thank you: this was one of two poems written on ‘pairs’; the other one is ‘BAths’ which I might post tomorrow π
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Nice take on the question. Shower every time for me. π
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same here, Hobbo: kit’s quicker and less fuss π
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Iβm team bath
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I’m tempted to post my ‘Bath’ poem tomorrow π
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and why not?
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I might like baths better if they were, on average, longer. I either get cold knees or cold shoulders. On that basis I prefer showers — the massage is good, relaxing, almost meditative. So I’m not sure that I agree that they are ill suited to contemplation. They also make a lot of noise which I like. I can sing or cry in the shower in blissful privacy. Love your poem though. Like JYP, I love the first line and also the concept of a “wet verse”. π
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thanks, Worms: I appreciate your comment: if you get a killer opening, you’re half way there π
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The last line is superb!
But I definitely prefer showers. They are a habit from childhood. Baths seem too lazy – like they may be lacking in their cleansing quality.
Great lines. So creative. π
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thanks Terveen: I may post its companion piece, ‘Baths’ later to day
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That would be wonderful. Looking forward. π
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I got my finger on the trigger, Terveen; I’m gonna do it — just got to find an illustration; won’t be long π
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I have to rethink my relationship to showers… you’re right, I could read a book while bathing.
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just don’t drop it in the bathwater π
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Showers! I havenβt taken a bath in I donβt know how long.
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for me, it’s been a few years: showers are less trouble though I used to love baths: maybe it’d an age thing ?
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I’m a shower person, and I can get my entire body wet at the same time. My shower head is big !
I don’t like sitting in a bath, water gets cold too quickly and I prefer scalding-heat. I also feel like I’m just marinating in my own dirt! Hahaha
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π that last thought is an issue with me too ; showers are cleaner and quicker π
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Showers are the junk food
of personal hygiene π
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oooo I like that; that is a great metaphor π
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But then, just like fast food,
the humble shower is a gift
to the great malnourished
and unwashed π πΏ
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Showers shoot without warning, but sunshineβs I prefer the sprinkle of the shower fairies to inspire a new fictional flight. Such a fun piece. Whimsy and wisdom. Yes, that is you.
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