
I’m glad I got to go to the outhouse by the sea.
I got to see the whales go by, far below me,
those sleek black submarines in the golden light
dozens of them dozens, an armada of might
dark, silent mysterious, they forged through the waves,
out through the headlands, to a distant sea.
I’m glad my bladder was full, got to take a pee.
And when I got back, and fell back to sleep,
I could see them still, moving through my dream.
*pic courtesy of pinterest
Never know what a full bladder might lead you to. π
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hahahaha; it worked this time π
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An interesting take on a dream situation!
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one of the benefits of a full bladder: oceanic dreams π
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Yes, they certainly go together!
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I enjoyed this so much! I love how the grand imagery turned to βpeeβ and then returned once more! The beauty of dreams and magnificent creatures and the reality of a wake up call!
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thank you; I often do this to ensure the ‘grand’ verse doesn’t get too up itself π
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Bwahaha π€£
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water in, water out )
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hahaha; that’s a great way of summing up the poem π
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I don’t normally get up to pee during the night. I don’t want to leave the warmth of the bed! Still, I’ve never had a dream like this.
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it was so real, Eden, when I went back to bed I just slipped into it like you would a T-shirt π
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You didn’t do a long drop as well? Too embarrassing. I understand John.
I visited the outhouse
To see what I could see
As well I did a long drop
Plus for me, a pee
Ahh……
Saw nuffing……
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hahaha; how’s this for an equation, Don: full bladder = inspiration
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peeutiful……
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Nice one, John. Dreams can be magical. Have a whale of a time. π
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hahaha; thanks Terveen; will do π
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That’s a whale of a dream.
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dreams don’t get much bigger, Bob π
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A very fascinating dream to get !
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thank you; and it was so real —
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I dare not to write a pun about dreams with water, hmm. In Sweden we call politicians lies Whale Pork, ValflΓ€sk! But I guess that is a bit of a nightmare.
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haha; I like that π
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The only thing Iβve ever seen in an outhouse is the missed remains of clumsy partygoers that went before me. You make this pace seem magical. Like Dr. Whoβs phone booth.
Way to bring outhouses back, John. Such good fun.
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hahaha; thanks K: it was all in a dream, it came to me in dream language, ‘outhouse’ rather than ‘toilet’ and those whales! rhyming verse to ‘ennoble’ it and two little transgressive non-rhymes that I think add to the sparkle π
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Youβve done this reverie justice, my friend. A new classic. Iβve bookmarked to revisit.
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thanks K; much appreciated π
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